Transition between nothingness and sex is where it's funny to see the quality of the writing, and here it's straight up ass. Most of the time barely (or not even) consensual relationships, like Bobby peeking at girls when they're asleep, jerkin off or touching them, or blackmailiing / abuse of naivety. But even that aside, characters are dumbed down to 20 iq and put in laughable situations.
Overused uninteresting tropes from porn and hentais, like oops I fell on your dick unintentionnally! Or girls masturbating completetly naked very loudly, while they're in small closed and shared spaces, like bedrooms of 4 or tents, clearly saying out loud who they're touching themselves to (very natual ofc) so the mc can hear it, no effort to be discreet or subtle whatsoever. And is everyone horse drugged when they're asleep or something? How can you pull out someone's dick and touch it, or pussy, or ass, or whatever and not wake em up? It doesn't quite work like this, you'd know and wake up immediately if anybody would just come nearby you in a sus way when you're sleeping, but here it's laughable and ridiculous, in addition to be morally questionable.
Or idk, how stupid everyone is, and how it's used to abuse them a lot of time, like Mikasa or Hange, how on earth can she be naive to do these special training, or confuse a finger with a dick and not be doubtful nor open her eyes, how can Hange not notice the titans are nowhere to be seen active during night, yet is full of theories and observations like they don't have any digestive or reproductive system and a weakness on the neck, how can the characters not notice when Bobby sexualize their interactions in a (not at all) hidden and subtle way, Help with physical exercises, massages, sleeping together, interactions that Bobby uses to initiate sexual contact with girls and without making sure they're aware and consent, is just lazy and poor writing, overused boring scenes and tropes.
Besides, if you play an AoT NSFW game, it's because the characters appeals to you, right? By that logic, where's the fun or the excitment when these are out of characters and dumbed down? Don't you want to bang the real characters? Or in a believable way? Do you like relationships with stupid dolls with temp room iq? Or non consensual sex? To be fair, there is some gray spots, like it's sometimes implied that Mikasa knew and agreed all along and just played dumb, and Sasha says it clearly, but still, at the time, Bobby wasn't aware or making sure for any of that, and I'd argue most of the cases aren't gray like that, + it doesn't make up for anything.
I'm not asking for shakespeare level of writing, I KNOW people are here just to jerk and it's not that deep, but omg, here it's the bottompit, no effort, ridiculous, unbelievable, 0 shit given, laughable, like come on now, it's 100% possible to write all that in a consensual and believable way, WITHOUT 9999 lines of dialogues, WITHOUT restraining yourself on your fetishes and scenes, WITHOUT being a professional writer, and I'm not asking for a faithful adaptation of AoT either, it's not even about that, it's about being somewhat believable and doing some effort at least. I don't care if Ymir isn't 100% faithful to AoT but when you're telling me you fell asleep next to her and toucher her boob all night without her realizing while she absoluetly hates you I can't take you seriously, it has nothing to do with being faithful or sum. Everything is just dumb and cliche.
It's mostly an Arc 1 and narrative transitions to sex problem, otherwise it's decent, starts good, intelligent plot and use of AoT, nice animations especially the more you get to the most recent updates (late arc 2 / arc 3), it's progressive in sex intensity with each character and keep you at bay (maybe WAY TOO MUCH masturbations scenes tho, and Elsa might have the longest build up ever), a lot of good ideas and never falls flat / always new ideas / interesting, nice settings and scenes, to be fair, once the narrative transitions to sex are done with a character, it's generally quite good and dope, since it's CONSENSUAL from here and characters are going back to somewhat an intelligent brain, so mostly an arc 1 issue like I said,
All in all the game starts very good, is mostly great, especially the more you advance in the arcs, characters are somewhat respected at least a little in their personalities, but the game has a HUGE PROBLEM with its narratives transitions to sex, where they do not explicitely consent with you to have a relationship like that yet, mostly in arc 1, it's lazy, cliche, boring, laughable, crazy, what the fuck, morally doubtful, and any other adjective to say poorly written and ridiculous, which is too bad considering the rest and the potential, and how it flows naturally and is very pleasant once the sex is mutually established with a character. So overall the issue does not represent the majority of the game, more like 1/3, which is why I'd rate it 3-4 / 5 stars still, it's mostly dope, but I can't turn a blind eye on how ridiculous and stupid it can be or poorly written at times, especially when it comes to reach a sexual relationship with a character you don't have yet.
Recommend but with caution and warning that there is a lot of issues and dark areas, and only get really good after really far into the game. + severely dumbed down characters and often OoC, which again is a lil issue when it's for these characters you're coming for.
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Transition between nothingness and sex is where it's funny to see the quality of the writing, and here it's straight up ass. Most of the time barely (or not even) consensual relationships, like Bobby peeking at girls when they're asleep, jerkin off or touching them, or blackmailiing / abuse of naivety. But even that aside, characters are dumbed down to 20 iq and put in laughable situations.
Overused uninteresting tropes from porn and hentais, like oops I fell on your dick unintentionnally! Or girls masturbating completetly naked very loudly, while they're in small closed and shared spaces, like bedrooms of 4 or tents, clearly saying out loud who they're touching themselves to (very natual ofc) so the mc can hear it, no effort to be discreet or subtle whatsoever.
And is everyone horse drugged when they're asleep or something? How can you pull out someone's dick and touch it, or pussy, or ass, or whatever and not wake em up? It doesn't quite work like this, you'd know and wake up immediately if anybody would just come nearby you in a sus way when you're sleeping, but here it's laughable and ridiculous, in addition to be morally questionable.
Or idk, how stupid everyone is, and how it's used to abuse them a lot of time, like Mikasa or Hange, how on earth can she be naive to do these special training, or confuse a finger with a dick and not be doubtful nor open her eyes, how can Hange not notice the titans are nowhere to be seen active during night, yet is full of theories and observations like they don't have any digestive or reproductive system and a weakness on the neck, how can the characters not notice when Bobby sexualize their interactions in a (not at all) hidden and subtle way,
Help with physical exercises, massages, sleeping together, interactions that Bobby uses to initiate sexual contact with girls and without making sure they're aware and consent, is just lazy and poor writing, overused boring scenes and tropes.
Besides, if you play an AoT NSFW game, it's because the characters appeals to you, right? By that logic, where's the fun or the excitment when these are out of characters and dumbed down? Don't you want to bang the real characters? Or in a believable way? Do you like relationships with stupid dolls with temp room iq? Or non consensual sex?
To be fair, there is some gray spots, like it's sometimes implied that Mikasa knew and agreed all along and just played dumb, and Sasha says it clearly, but still, at the time, Bobby wasn't aware or making sure for any of that, and I'd argue most of the cases aren't gray like that, + it doesn't make up for anything.
I'm not asking for shakespeare level of writing, I KNOW people are here just to jerk and it's not that deep, but omg, here it's the bottompit, no effort, ridiculous, unbelievable, 0 shit given, laughable, like come on now, it's 100% possible to write all that in a consensual and believable way, WITHOUT 9999 lines of dialogues, WITHOUT restraining yourself on your fetishes and scenes, WITHOUT being a professional writer, and I'm not asking for a faithful adaptation of AoT either, it's not even about that, it's about being somewhat believable and doing some effort at least. I don't care if Ymir isn't 100% faithful to AoT but when you're telling me you fell asleep next to her and toucher her boob all night without her realizing while she absoluetly hates you I can't take you seriously, it has nothing to do with being faithful or sum. Everything is just dumb and cliche.
It's mostly an Arc 1 and narrative transitions to sex problem, otherwise it's decent, starts good, intelligent plot and use of AoT, nice animations especially the more you get to the most recent updates (late arc 2 / arc 3), it's progressive in sex intensity with each character and keep you at bay (maybe WAY TOO MUCH masturbations scenes tho, and Elsa might have the longest build up ever), a lot of good ideas and never falls flat / always new ideas / interesting, nice settings and scenes, to be fair, once the narrative transitions to sex are done with a character, it's generally quite good and dope, since it's CONSENSUAL from here and characters are going back to somewhat an intelligent brain, so mostly an arc 1 issue like I said,
All in all the game starts very good, is mostly great, especially the more you advance in the arcs, characters are somewhat respected at least a little in their personalities, but the game has a HUGE PROBLEM with its narratives transitions to sex, where they do not explicitely consent with you to have a relationship like that yet, mostly in arc 1, it's lazy, cliche, boring, laughable, crazy, what the fuck, morally doubtful, and any other adjective to say poorly written and ridiculous, which is too bad considering the rest and the potential, and how it flows naturally and is very pleasant once the sex is mutually established with a character. So overall the issue does not represent the majority of the game, more like 1/3, which is why I'd rate it 3-4 / 5 stars still, it's mostly dope, but I can't turn a blind eye on how ridiculous and stupid it can be or poorly written at times, especially when it comes to reach a sexual relationship with a character you don't have yet.
Recommend but with caution and warning that there is a lot of issues and dark areas, and only get really good after really far into the game. + severely dumbed down characters and often OoC, which again is a lil issue when it's for these characters you're coming for.
Typed all this over a porn game
Is the patreon version accurate to the one being displayed here, or is it exclusive?
I think the versions need to be updated?